clever, and not overly done. I like it a lot.
clever, and not overly done. I like it a lot.
Animation quality was pretty solid - modeling and lighting was nice, but I have two rather significant issues.
1) Nothing is narrated in this animation. Nothing is discovered, nothing changes, and nothing is revealed. This is hugely problematic in a prologue, something that typically acts as a tool to set the stage for episodes to come.
2) the way your character holds his weapon is a bit odd. Typically, when holding a rifle/shotgun, the arm that holds the handle bends almost completely and sticks out of the torso at about an 80degree angle. The other arm typically stays parallel to the torso, bending back upwards to meet the other end of the gun. This is probably poorly explained, and a bit of time looking at reference pics and videos would prove beneficial. At the very least, you did an excellent job keeping the awkward anatomy from being visible.
fantastic! I can't say I loved the song (although it was still fairly catchy) but I can't penalize you for that when the animation was so fluid, stylish, and overall breathtaking! wonderfully done!
well animated, but hardly funny.
I'm sorry to say it, but I just didn't find this funny. The quality of animation was fine, but I came here to laugh and left without even a chickle. Sorry.
more of a showreel than a fight scene,
but still pretty nice. Just wish the framerate was a little smoother.
really really neat.
The interesting thing about this piece is that I would have seen it as something you would play for a little child along with one of those songs that teaches him the alphabet. But you threw an impressive curveball and turned this into a sort of psycho-thriller with a shocking amount of depth.
This is truly fascinating to me, like if someone were to use Barney as a false idol to enslave mankind.
Haha this is a great review XD Thanks man, I'm glad the psycho-thriller parts held strong while also giving the meaning well!
amazing.
Great sense of humor,
great "Saturday Morning Cartoon" vibe
and a PAUSE FEATURE!?!?!?!? Why doesn't every flash movie on Newgrounds have that?????? You, sir, are a legend.
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